Blog #8

The main aspects that I consistently struggle with throughout my papers is my use of transitions, or lack of. When I write my papers, I find the connection in my head, but when I transfer it to my paper it doesn't work as well as it does in my head. I also tend to struggle with sandwiching my quotes with a lead into the quote and then something said about the quote afterwards. I tend to just leave my quotes hanging a bit. So, I need to pay closer attention to my transitions and make sure I'm really connecting my current point to the next point without it being too obvious. I also need to maybe choose my quotes more carefully, and choose quotes that I can sandwich and not left hanging in my writing without explanation.